The Taste of Hollow Promises

What bothers you and why?

The crystal resonance chamber hummed with the discordant frequencies of exhaustion as Mira Coalwright pressed her palm against the pulsing wall, feeling the vibrations travel through bone and sinew like needles of crystallized fatigue. Sixteen hours. Sixteen hours of channeling harmonic energy through the primary stabilization matrix, her voice raw from maintaining the precise tonal qualities that kept Lumenvale’s foundational crystals from catastrophic discord.

Her supervisor, Guildmaster Thornwick, materialized from the administrative alcove with the practiced smile of someone who had never spent a day performing the actual work he oversaw. His robes remained pristine despite the grinding shifts that had become routine, his hands soft and unmarked by the crystalline burns that scarred every resonance worker’s fingers.

“Exemplary work today, Coalwright,” he announced, his voice carrying the hollow enthusiasm of rehearsed appreciation. “The Council has noted the exceptional stability readings during the morning flux cascade. Your dedication does not go unnoticed.”

Mira’s jaw tightened as she recognized the familiar cadence of corporate platitudes wrapped in guild-speak. The same words, delivered with the same manufactured warmth, that had preceded every empty promise for the past three years. She could recite them herself by now—*valued member of the team, essential to our operation, bright future ahead.*

“The overtime compensation you mentioned last month?” she ventured, her voice hoarse from hours of harmonic channeling. “The promotion to Senior Resonance Keeper that was ‘virtually guaranteed’ after the last restructuring?”

Thornwick’s smile never wavered, but something shifted behind his eyes—a flicker of annoyance quickly smothered beneath layers of professional condescension. “Ah, well, you understand how these administrative matters progress. The Council requires extensive documentation, peer reviews, budgetary assessments. These things take time.”

*Time.* The word tasted like ash in her mouth. Three years of ‘taking time’ while her wages remained frozen at apprentice levels despite performing work that required master-level certification. Three years of watching newer guild members advance past her through family connections and political maneuvering while she maintained the essential systems that kept the city from collapsing into harmonic chaos.

“However,” Thornwick continued, producing a small cloth bag from his robes with theatrical flourish, “the Guild wishes to express its appreciation for your recent efforts.”

Mira stared at the offering—a collection of crystallized honey drops, the kind sold at market stalls for copper pennies. Children’s sweets. The type of treat one might give to a particularly obedient pet or a small child who had completed their chores without complaint.

The sight of those sugary fragments sent something cold and sharp through her chest, a crystalline splinter of rage that cut deeper than any physical wound. Sixteen hours of channeling forces that could level buildings, preventing disasters that would have killed thousands, maintaining systems that required years of study to even comprehend—and her reward was candy.

“There’s also this,” Thornwick added, producing a small cooling charm—a basic trinket that would keep a single drink cold for perhaps an hour. The kind of novelty item apprentices created during their first week of enchantment training. “For those long shifts during the summer months. Practical and thoughtful, wouldn’t you agree?”

Mira’s hands trembled as she accepted the pathetic offerings, her exhaustion-dulled mind struggling to process the sheer audacity of the gesture. Behind Thornwick, she could see the gleaming administrative offices where Guild leadership conducted their ‘essential’ meetings in climate-controlled comfort, their desks laden with delicacies imported from distant realms while the actual workers sustained themselves on whatever they could afford from their meager wages.

“Of course,” Thornwick continued, his tone suggesting he was bestowing tremendous generosity, “if you continue demonstrating such exemplary dedication, I’m confident that significant advancement opportunities will present themselves. The Guild values loyalty above all else.”

*Loyalty.* Another word that had been stripped of meaning through repetition and betrayal. Loyalty demanded from those who gave everything while receiving nothing in return. Loyalty as a one-way street where workers were expected to sacrifice their health, their time, their very essence for the promise of rewards that never materialized.

“I trust you’ll be ready for tomorrow’s extended shift,” Thornwick added, consulting a crystal tablet that pulsed with scheduling information. “The Council has requested enhanced monitoring during the seasonal transition. Your expertise is… indispensable.”

*Indispensable.* Yet somehow never valuable enough to justify actual compensation. Never essential enough to warrant the respect due to someone whose skills kept an entire city from descending into chaos. The cognitive dissonance of being simultaneously crucial and worthless had become a constant companion, a psychological wound that never quite healed.

As Thornwick departed, his footsteps echoing through corridors that led to comfortable offices and generous salaries, Mira remained in the resonance chamber, surrounded by the machinery of her exploitation. The crystalline walls pulsed with energies she had spent years learning to manipulate, systems that would fail catastrophically without her expertise, yet her value to the organization apparently equaled a handful of candy and a child’s cooling charm.

She thought of her colleagues who had quietly left the Guild over the past year, their resignation letters citing ‘pursuing other opportunities’ when the truth was simpler: they had finally recognized that their dedication was being weaponized against them. That their competence had become a trap, their reliability a reason to heap ever-increasing burdens upon their shoulders without corresponding rewards.

The honey drops felt sticky in her palm, their sweetness now tainted by the bitter recognition of what they represented. Not appreciation, but condescension. Not gratitude, but contempt dressed in the language of corporate generosity. The cooling charm clinked against her fingers with the hollow sound of promises made by people who had never intended to keep them.

Around her, the crystal matrices hummed with the energy she had poured into them, her life force literally incorporated into the city’s infrastructure. Years of her existence transformed into stabilizing frequencies that would outlast her by centuries, yet her compensation remained locked at levels that barely covered basic survival.

The exhaustion that had become her constant companion deepened as she contemplated tomorrow’s ‘extended shift’—another sixteen-hour marathon of channeling dangerous energies while Guild leadership met in air-conditioned comfort to discuss productivity metrics and profit margins. Another day of being told she was valued while being treated as disposable.

Mira closed her eyes and let the resonance chamber’s frequencies wash over her, feeling the subtle discord that had nothing to do with crystalline harmonics and everything to do with the fundamental injustice of systems designed to extract maximum value from those who could least afford to give it. The taste of hollow promises lingered on her tongue, bitter as wormwood, persistent as grief.

In the distance, she could hear the evening shift arriving—younger voices filled with the optimism she had once possessed, before years of exploitation had taught her the true nature of Guild loyalty. They would learn, as she had learned, that dedication without boundaries became slavery, that competence without leverage became a life sentence of exploitation.

The honey drops melted slowly in her palm, their sweetness dissolving into nothing, leaving only the residue of contempt and the crystalline certainty that something fundamental would have to change before the system consumed what remained of her soul.

Tomorrow would bring another extended shift, another day of being simultaneously indispensable and undervalued. But tonight, surrounded by the fruits of her labor and the hollow tokens of her employer’s appreciation, Mira Coalwright finally understood that the thing that bothered her most was not the work itself, but the lie that hard work would be rewarded, that loyalty would be reciprocated, that her value as a human being mattered to those who profited from her expertise.

The crystals hummed their eternal song, and she hummed along, her voice carrying frequencies of recognition, of boundary-setting, of the quiet revolution that began when someone finally refused to accept candy as payment for their soul.


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